Can You See Me Now?

by Beautiful Forever   Mar 16, 2009


Fractured thoughts are too slow,
Your touch is so cold,
Illusions of my fears show,
You're not mine to hold,

I reach out but grab air,
You smile with a waving hand,
It's all I can do to stare,
A moment I'll never understand,

Years pass to give one more chance,
I recognize the look in your eyes,
You don't remember our romance,
As if I'm wearing a disguise,

My senses are torn apart,
My image is blurred somehow,
I scream with all of my heart,
Can you see me now?

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  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Excellent piece, sorry I haven't read your work in a bit. This was so good, what powerful emotions you portrayed, this was such a entrancing write from start to finish. Flawless emotion that really brought the reader into the piece. Take care and God Bless!

    ~MaryAnne

  • 15 years ago

    by Twisted Mind Broken Soul

    This piece is amazing. You can clearly see the emotions you put into this poem && you can tell that it's how you really feel.

    Good job && keep up the good work. I love reading all your poetry && you are such an amazing writer.

    5/5

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