Street lights illuminate the ebbing darkness,
guiding my lonely way through empty alleys.
Lurking among the cold and desperate lives,
shadows hoping to escape from the light.
I just want to be near you.
Daylight breaks upon the rocky horizon,
my palm held open to grasp your hand.
You won't ever hold my wanting hand,
I keep lurking among the quiet shadows.
Wow...
I have no idea why people have commented this. Crazy if you ask me. I loved this poem. There was something about it that was just amazing. I don't know if it was your ateention to detail when it came to imagey or the simple way your words flowed into each other. I read this with such ease and that is wonderful. This poem really shows your talent as a writer and that's what makes this so great. Your emotions was expressed in a controlled way making this an excellent poem. *huggles* Keep amazing me hun. Nik