Flames

by xXHunnyGurlXx   Mar 17, 2009


The house was covered,
In thick black smoke,
It filled my lungs,
As I began to choke..
I crawled to the door,
But it wouldnt open,
Trapped..
All I could do was hope and,
Pray to god that Ill survive,
But I was nowhere close,
To feeling alive..
The flames scorched,
My burning skin,
I shut my eyes,
And thought of the happiness within..
I slowly fell to an unconscious state,
Knowing its over,
That this was my fate..

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  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Wow this was so descriptive and you really put the image in the readers mind, Your poetry is truly amazing. You certainly have alot of talent. It flowed so well, and so simply. Really enjoyed this. Keep up the excellent writes. 5/5 and nothing less!

  • 15 years ago

    by Brittany

    I really like this, i like the imagery. when i was reading i could picture it in my mind.