Your not a falure of a writer. this is beautifully written. 5/5

This was a fantastic write. a failure? i think NOT! this had many emotions, a very well expressed piece. please keep those poems coming! 5/5.

-Ashlei.

I absolutely love this one darling<3 i can relate to it in so many ways. thats how i feel about him :/ everything you write is magnificent and everything i wish i could say. i cant write a decent poem anymore. even with everything i have to and want to say i just cant put them into words. but its like you do it for me! iloveyou mi amor<3

I must disagree with you this poem is great 5/5