A lovely tribute to your friend. She sounds beautiful inside and out. 5/5

A really amazing dedication to a friend who is a true gem. This is one of my favorite forms and you have done a flawless job in my opinion. There was so much imagery, and not only were you descriptive but you gave off much more. A lovely write that shows such writing skill you have. 5/5 from me, keep writing, always and forever...

God Bless You!

~MaryAnne

Wow this is beautiful.. what a great dedication to a friend who means a lot to you.. Really well done, not much to say.. it's definatly better than most friendship poems you see on the site..also well done with the Rictameter.

Good job.

5/5.

Very beautiful dedication ... i love the use of word fragile... it has added so much softness to it... lovely write...

This is another 'wow' poem from you Ingrid!
What great words you string together here, creating
a perfect, descriptive vision of this fragile porcelain doll.
Every word has an impact, and hits home every time! Good work Ingrid!