Once again a form that requires few words to deliver a powerful mesage to the reader. You have used it well and your words are true. Love is that and more. 5/5

My goodness! I am always learning something new from you, I truly have never heard of this form before, thank you for sharing this masterpiece. In such short words you have expressed such a deep and meaningful message. Excellent word choice, nothing that could be improved in my opinion. 5/5 from me, take care and keep writing, always and forever....

God Bless You and Your Family!

~MaryAnne

This was really good Ingrid, its amazing what a few words can do or say.. you really brought forth a great message here.. and I thought your words spoke a lot of the truth. It's almost as if I was saying it myself.. I agreed with every word written here..

Well done,

5/5.

This is really excellent, I love poetry that says so much in just a few words, you handled this form beautifully.

Never seen this type of poem before but nice job (: