Could actually hear the high heel shoes as she walked and for me a dark alleyway. Danger!! Dark and scary, gave me goosebumps. Good job to both of you. 5/5

Well well I never saw this collab coming. I like the idea that this poem was written in a narration style.I can feel the intensity of the scene which both of you have created, which helps me as the reader visualize the scene thoughout the poem.Seriously i couldn't tell whose line was whose which made this collab a job well done

5/5 from me