Ode to a flat piece of metal

by Loecs   Mar 18, 2009


I look up from my book and see it,
If I didn’t I’d likely have a fit,
My flat piece of metal so silver and cold,
That I got because I was bold,
It is flat as several pieces of paper,
And shiny like a piece of aluminum foil that in no way resembles the metal itself,
I loved my flat piece of metal,
Until I found a rose petal.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Good Enough

    Lol until u found a rose pedal? tht was so amazing 5/5 thanks for the laugh