You wanted critiscm? Okay:

Well, I liked the idea of this but what you've done here is told the reader everything and not shown them through narrative. If you tell the reader, the reader becomes detatched and that's the last thing you need I'm not saying it's a bad poem, you'd have you rewrite it if you were going to take my advice but just for future reference.
Plus I found it rather confusing, the reader's view of the other character was sort of love/hate and I didn't quite get where you were going with that.
Your flow was good, and the form was okay, the repetition made the poem predictable though, which is the shame with poetry that does that.

Regardless, I see what you're doing and it's a good write nevertheless.

Well... I think it was a great poem.. Enjoyable & sweet 5/5