I must admit I didn't expect the meaning of the poem to be suicide. I had a feeling you weren't going to literally deal with flying, but the twist was refreshing. In my poetry I enjoy making the reader think one thing and then switching it to be something they didn't expect. Also the flow seemed impeccable. I didn't have to stop or repeat any lines that I read. Definately a good job. 5/5 for sure. I'm looking forward to reading your other material.

--Kurt--