Lost soul's wonder...

by RoseBlood   Mar 19, 2009


Lifeless body was found in the sea
People just watched and ironically said
"Wow, another girl has jumped of the cliff"

Family and friends were grieving in pain
People saw them and judged:
"Didn't she think she would hurt them?"

Then the stories were told about the life of the girl
The people just coldly acknowledged:
"She did have a hard time in this world"

The girl's mistakes and failures in life
Were told as her darkest secrets and cries
The cold people just thought
"She deserves all of our judgments!"

The girl's soul just flooded over them
Cried and wondered
"Didn't anybody think I deserved a second chance?
Had anyone ever cared?"

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  • 15 years ago

    by ForsakenBeautyXx

    This is so sad., It also states many of the things someone might even think about before killing themselves. Its terrible though, how they just refered to her as 'another girl' as if she didn't have a name, or place in the world. Beautiful description in this poem, you really made the reader feel these thoughts.

    5/5

    ashley
    P.S. Your welcome. :]]

  • 15 years ago

    by ForsakenBeautyXx

    This is so sad., It also states many of the things someone might even think about before killing themselves. Its terrible though, how they just refered to her as 'another girl' as if she didn't have a name, or place in the world. Beautiful description in this poem, you really made the reader feel these thoughts.

    5/5

    ashley
    P.S. Your welcome. :]]

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