by SHYSTY23KO Mar 19, 2009
category :
Internet slang /
love, romance
*i don't know exactly how to format it right so that its easy to read s that it flows right!* |
The only way I can deal with that shit is by just thinking about the moment and saying I don't give a shit about anything that happens and staying busy. but good poem btw |
by Hollymariee
This is really fantastic , and the title fits it well . Good job with finding one :) . It's very easy to relate to , and I really enjoyed it . The flow is so natural , and the rhymes are never forced and different . I think you did really well other than a few spelling mistakes that have already been pointed out . You deserve much more than a 4/5 for this . |
Sorry, forgot about the suggestion for titles, well here they are, hope this helps! |
"See i know I've caused you more pain then you could ever bring to me, |
by Krathia
I suggest "One person to run/turn to". Good poem, by the way. |