I would call this "Four Stringed Heart." I don't know why...it seems to just fit to me... |
by PygmyPuff
Great poem. I like the emotion and story behind it, its a great start. I'll give you some SUGGESTIONS for improvement (of course you don’t need to do what I suggest, do what you feel best) |
by PygmyPuff
Oh, sorry about the strange text... I had copied ur poem into Word so I could see if fully and not scroll up and down... they should all be appostrophes or quotes :( |
by Krathia
I suggest "One person to run/turn to". Good poem, by the way. |
"See i know I've caused you more pain then you could ever bring to me, |
Sorry, forgot about the suggestion for titles, well here they are, hope this helps! |
by Hollymariee
This is really fantastic , and the title fits it well . Good job with finding one :) . It's very easy to relate to , and I really enjoyed it . The flow is so natural , and the rhymes are never forced and different . I think you did really well other than a few spelling mistakes that have already been pointed out . You deserve much more than a 4/5 for this . |
The only way I can deal with that shit is by just thinking about the moment and saying I don't give a shit about anything that happens and staying busy. but good poem btw |