Comments : King Leo

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Deana,

    Thank you for asking me to do this with you.

    It was an honor and a privilege:)

    Good luck on the challenge!

    *hugs*

    5/5 ( for your part) Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Deana,
    What a delightful read from you and Ingrid. You two blended very well and made an adorable read.
    I love the arrogance of the lion and how he thinks he is just the best and falters when he is around his crush. How cute. Wonderful job Sis,
    Kay

  • 15 years ago

    by Lu

    Wonderfully penned !!!

    Deana this piece flowed so magically. I love how it read so smoothly and it was as though 2 people were writing as 1. Great job on this challenge Deana !!!

    Well done both of you .... awesome read

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Love lions and their behavior. (Just like men!) 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    I have to watch the Lion King again after reading this! It reminded me i havent seen it in far too long!
    I like the comparison to men? I may have taken it wrong, but thats what i got. Lazy and arrogant. Haha.
    A cute poem and a great collab. It flowed together wonderfully. :]
    5/5