The sadness is obvious in this write. Desperation in love does cause pain, intense pain. We seem to torture ourselves asking why and at some point just get to tired to respond or care. Good write. 5/5

This is an awesome write Kay, sad and very real! I think we have all felt this way at times, I hope things improve for you sis! A great write!

Kay
This is a very deep emotion filled piece.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Nice short write with great depth and meaning. The flow was excellent, keep up the fantastic writes.

Peace, Joe

Awesome write kay, really like this one. 5/5

This is so brilliantly written piece. Short but still manages to say it all, very rarely could people do that. Great one.

all the best and take care

Beautiful write ...
loved the imagery... flowing with deep emotion... and the ending makes the write very powerful...

Though this is a short piece, I can feel the sad emotions running through this poem. I like how you used nature(ocean, mountain etc) to help enhance your poem. I think it really worked well here.It was certainly delightful to read.

Excellent Job
5/5

5/5
this is amazing.
xxx

This is wonderful Kay, sad but real. I love the style of the poem. It added to the whole feel of the poem.

A short but strong write Kay I really enjoyed it, very nice work.

The title captured me, I love your opening, ending and everything in between, great job!

Such an interesting piece. I see hurt and anger. I see the questions, and lost horizons. Yes, there is pain, and the insults we all fear to face. How many of us have been there? How many fear to move on? How many are trong enough to put it in a so permanent form of the written word? Well done.