Comments : Bring The Rain ( Rondeau )

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Very nice. One of my favorite songs as well. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Lu

    Love bears all things and thus sets us free
    I surrender to You, who once died for me
    My savior, my shelter, my one true home
    I will praise You Lord, wherever I may roam
    Set-backs are just lessons, love is the key
    Bring the rain......
    ^^^
    Beautiful ending. I love the message in this piece. Very strong and powerful !!!

    Wonderfully penned Rondeau. Love the form!

    Thanks for sharing this wonderful read

  • 15 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    Ingrid, this is beautiful. And, I have been listening to "Bring the Rain" over and over since last night. It's just a beautiful song!

    :) Thank you for sharing this, my friend.

    Hugs

    Bri~

    <So I pray...
    Bring me joy,
    Bring me peace,
    Bring the chance to be free,
    Bring me anything that brings You glory.

    And I know they'll be days
    When this life brings me pain,
    But if that's what it takes to praise You...
    Jesus, bring the rain.>

    :) Absolutely beautiful.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    I havent heard the song you wrote from, but after reading your poem, i have to hear it. The inspiration for such a poem, deserves a listen. What a masterpiece you have penned here.
    It was beautiful, a truly stunning write. What more can i say?
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by mandy

    That was amazing, so inspirational! Keep writting, 5/5!

    -mandy :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    Maya I really love your Rondeau and everyday I find I want to give thanks for what our God and Saviour has give me. Like you all it takes is anything that brings joy or happiness in all its wonderous forms a song a childs smiles, my wife who fills my heart daily, my children and grandchildren. So much joy and so much because of his sacrifice for us to give thanks for. I to have never heard this song but will be looking it up on the net shortly. Excellent 5/5