Sad at the beginning but the ast verse brings back happiness and joy. 5/5

Very nicely written mom, very sad. i wish i could help you feel better. 5/5

Cindy,
You always have that magical way of conveying your depth of sorrow in your poetry. I love the way you always bring the reader into your life and make them a part of your surroundings and grief. I know that when you do go that you will smile and rejoice with your lost loved John. All my prayers are always with you. Great write and although sad it was beautiful in the same sense.

Reading you poems is always like listening to them right from you. They are intense and makes every reader feel as if it has been written for them. This is one powerful magic which is shown in every poem of yours.

all the best and take care

I feel the loneliness of life as well as the sad
plight which accompanies it. The last two
verses were especially touching..take care.

Cindy Dear,again beautiful write that depicts your heart full of pain.The love you have for your lost one can be felt in every verse.
Your last line shows the solace you find in his arms.May God bless you.Take care.
5/5

I must say that I really enjoyed the first stanza a lot, it really drew me in and made me want to read more.. I do agree with the fact that sometimes pain becomes so much that it feels like its eating you alive almost.. this was quite sad but some of that sadness went away towards the end, yet some still is there..

A very well written poem.

Impressive,
5/5.

Cindy,

I can only imagine this kind of pain, a pain that is a constant, torturous and seemingly full of malace. I can almost imagine such a fantasy, a time in the future where such a burden would be lifted and pain would feature no more, instead it would be replaced with smiles reflected from kind familiar faces.

Well done on this my dear. :)

Take care

Michael

Very touching piece Cindy ...

"Life has stolen so much
Everyone I love goes away
Nothing left but my voice
It's being silenced everyday "

^^ thats the game life plays with us ... it presents us with wonderful moments only to be snatched away.. what remains is memories... wonderfully penned...

"Maybe I will find some peace
Shadows chase me through my days
Magical dreams were shattered
Shine your loving light my way "

^^ there is so much sadness and loneliness in these lines ... very hearfel lines...

beautiful piece...

Beautiful really..
it's like i feel your pain in the lines you wrote..

Really touching

Wonderful begining, and a beautiful end. Very well done, and worded. What a way to see a passing, as a release from all the pains, and the dread. And, perhaps, a flight into a so wanted paradise.