OMG i love this poem i'm going through this.....do you mind if i copy this and send it to him??

This is a beautiful way to say all the things im feeling.

Well I like how you unfurl this poem in a confessional manner of airing out your thoughts bout your relationship. I must say that it is well structure and you have set a nice pace and tone to the poem. Though it doesn't really make sense of clinging on to something that doesn't have a potential future but ironically in this present time it feel right. I like how you end the poem. Great Job.Keep it up