A very interesting poem indeed. After reading it, I give it a 5/5 for it was excellent work indeed. I like the style you put. not a normal one, but it still worked. Love to read more, AJ

I really loved this poem, but i dont think i really like the way it was 2 lines then 1 then 3 lines and then 1. It just seemed your set up was a little all over the place. But i still loved the poem itself, also i am a sucker for poems that end this way, like my poem where the person your revenging is yourself, i think they make for some great writes. Well this very amazing, keep up the good work and a well deserved 5/5

So much wisdom in the words that you write; WOW. 5/5, Em

This one was better and more indepth. Asking questions makes the reader more involved, makes them ask the same questions to themselves and that way they feel a part of the poem. Nice job

Maybe someday the master will show you how.

*For some reason I really love that line. It gets me thinking and I love that. I think this was a very creative piece and I love reading new ideas. This was my favorite out of the three you asked me to read. A lot my thought put into and depth as Karl said. This is one of your best piece I think. Keep it up hun :) Nik*