This is nicely written i enjoyed reading it

Keep up with this good work and keep writting

-God bless

This poems defenitely reflects our society today! And even though I am aware of all these things it breaks my heart to read it. 5/5

I like the fact that you didn't really use a rhyme. That seems bold to me. I think this is a very true and very powerful poem. I think this is a bold piece and very well written.

WOW, very profound