I liked the rhyming in this poem. :) It sounds perfect.

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Wow this is a really great poem. so strong and detailed. love it and thanks so much on the comments. Shanik

This flow'd really nice and i liked the idea behind it. but don't get down. nobody is perfect, and we must all live with our inperfections.

well done, ~Ben

Wow!

The flow was so dead on ....keep writin.. Loved the content as well...