by MikaMad15 Mar 21, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I tried to see through, |
by Fear2love
Wow wow wow :) me like |
by Saving Grace
I though it was good. Its a unique poem, and i like that. Although, like the comment above, maybe you did repeat yourself a bit. But, other then that its good. I didnt liek it as much as your last write. But a great effort. =] |
Ummm .... i think that this poem was ok i think you repeated (black) to much other that i liked it |