Wow i totally didn't expect the twist behind the title. It really took me by surprise. But I think the poem was nicely crafted. I like how each slashes makes you feel like a winner. Though this is a greatly written poem. I hope that this is fictional. If it is true andyou need someone to talk to you can always PM me , I'll be more than willing to help.

Excellent Job for the poem
5/5

A really sad poem that was deep.. I surely hope its just a poem as well.. but youve been a good piece here.. its very sad.. the end I thought was good, Ive heard that phrase used many times but I thought it fit great with your poem.. "cutting is my escape"

You did a nice job.

5/5.

Wow this is amazing,,
im wondring what game ur talking bout but ater i red it it really touch my heart,,
really great,,
5/5