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A heartbreaking write, you go to the core of what it is to just be lonely and without arms of love of any sort. It seems like not that much to ask to be loved in return, but trust that it will come in future days. There is kindness out there if you wait.

Truly a lot of feeling you worked into this poem- it meant a lot to read it.

MaryAnne

What I like is that this poem is straight to the point, you do explain the feeling and describe what it is like but you only say the needed. I think that the emotions are really powerful and it is quite touching. I also think that it actually flows quite well.

I like your portrayal of loneliness.At some point of time, we do sometimes feel lonely and feel the need to be love and find someone whom we can share our affections with. Though we can't force affections i guess we just have to wait til meet the right one.
It was certainl;y a delightful to read this poem.Keep it up

Great Job

I think many of us can relate to feeling bits and pieces of what youve said. I loved all the emotion and the words spoken from your heart here.. you could really tell that it was hard for the writer to put together this piece because of all the emotions they were feeling.. but you did a flawless job.. I really enjoyed this.

5/5.