Comments : Benign

  • 15 years ago

    by BornAgainWriter

    Wow Gabby, I...think I'm adding this to my favorites. I really liked it. Something I'm feeling, but just chose not to write aboutt.

    *Hugs you*

    I loved the way you wrote this.

  • 15 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    Sometimes, I think the poets of old
    were proper pricks,
    notwithstanding their education
    and doubting the boundaries of
    an ever-evident existence.

    ^This was my favorite part, it made me laugh to myself.

    Your heart feels tender in my claws,
    and I rip you to shreds.

    ^I like the image here, very dark.

    A nice read. Good work, I am definetely going to have to check out some more of your work.