Vampire's Proposal

by xXDarknessQueenXx   Mar 22, 2009


You could be my savior
Like Christ your blood
Will be my wine
And I'll drink you in worship of you
Until I'm drunk from your divinity
You shall want for nothing
Like a wizard
I'll grant your every wish
Your life will be filled with magic
And the world will kneel before you
You may be only human
But I could give you life eternal
Like a diamond
You will shine forever
And you shall never be forgotten.

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  • 14 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    Wow, that was hot.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Oh dear... its awesome poem... I love this poem... You are mindblowing poet, I like you writing style (5/5)

  • 15 years ago

    by The Shadowlust Inside Me

    Hmmmm... i like ur title it brought me in.. Like my poetry i love to write about the dark and unnatural... your poem has great potential.. but sometimes.. i cant find the rythm... the flow... the words that match that give it that extra HMPF!! i would ask of you to go back and maybe re think some of your words.. but the poem is quite nice and good now.. i only say this because it could become so much more then nice and good.. it could be great..

    -Shadowlust-

  • 15 years ago

    by Fran

    Well written. Especially liked the line :
    "Like a diamond
    You will shine forever
    And you shall never be forgotten. "
    Look forward to reading more.

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