Ever Lasting Predator

by xXDarknessQueenXx   Mar 22, 2009


Even a man pure in heart
And says his prayers at night
May become a wolf when the wolfbane blooms
And the moon shines bright
Or craves another's blood
When the sun goes down
And his body takes flight

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  • 15 years ago

    by The Shadowlust Inside Me

    I agree with schemilix ur ending needs something more.. just a few lines.. maybe talk about how or were this predator takes flight.. give it more of a story.. other then that this poem is great.. :) very nicely written... keep it up serina..

    -shadowlust-

  • 15 years ago

    by Armada the Gestalt

    A good poem with nice imagery and a pleasant flow, however, the end... it lacks soemthing. There's something missing. The poem seems incomplete, to me, somehow. Maybe just an extra line? I don't know.

    Anyhoo. I like 'and says his prayers at night' for some reason, it's just an interesting addition to the poem and fits well.

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