A good poem with nice imagery and a pleasant flow, however, the end... it lacks soemthing. There's something missing. The poem seems incomplete, to me, somehow. Maybe just an extra line? I don't know.

Anyhoo. I like 'and says his prayers at night' for some reason, it's just an interesting addition to the poem and fits well.

I agree with schemilix ur ending needs something more.. just a few lines.. maybe talk about how or were this predator takes flight.. give it more of a story.. other then that this poem is great.. :) very nicely written... keep it up serina..

-shadowlust-