Magnetic Mind.

I thought this was such a unique piece, and enjoyed reading your words. A different and orginal write that held a true meaning. Nice imagery and word choice that held my attention throughout. 5/5 from me, keep writing, always and forever! God Bless You!

~MaryAnne

Nice write, very original. I liked your choice of wording and the overall structure. Keep using your creative thought, it works well for you!

Peace, Joe

What a unique poem :) How true memories do stick in our minds...sometimes giving us comfort and others filled with pain. The painful ones seem to really get stuck.
Great job!
Take Care
Cindy

Congratulations, you have written an excellent poem. I am glad to see you venturing into other forms and styles.
You have give me another view of memories, metal bits throughout the mind. The mind does draw them in a like a magnet and addiction to a person is possible or an addiction to being in love. Stuck like super glue and we all know how that sticks to an article, much the same way those metal bits will stick in your mind. Cannot get rid of them no matter how hard you try. Well done. 5/5

Tempsy:)

Ha ha yes...super glue, I know what that is!
Nice to see you experimenting with this one:)

Some people have that magnetic force around them and we and our thoughts are pulled into that direction, even unknowingly or unwillingly.
I think you did well on this, I also think you could have made it twice as long and still held my attention! ( Maybe showing two sides of the coin?)

Good job, girlie:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid