Nothing

by envy   Mar 23, 2009


Nothing but white anymore
you've given up in most things
the mind of you is no longer you
white emptiness'. lines your soul
fear of being over-run by thoughts unknown

silence sounds everything now
useless, unfaithful, un-loyal
loneness!
giving into the nothingness of white

the needles falling,
one so subtle stands out
its yours, life's essential
falling fast and hits the dark

the point tipped with nothingness
takes over spreading from a single point
white begins to flood, darkness is soaked
life begins to scream

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  • 15 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    I like the way you wrote this one. I like how you portrayed the "white" ppl usually write of the "dark" and "black abyss". You conveyed a very strong dark theme with "giving into the nothingness of white"....i like :)
    5/5
    -laura