Comments : Step Back

  • 15 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    I like the format that you wrote this is in. I had a little trouble getting it started but then I found the rhythm.
    The message is beautifully conveyed. Definitely 5/5. Keep it up!

  • 15 years ago

    by Donna

    Definately 5/5, loved the flow of the poem.

    rate and comment some of mine please if u get the chance