Lady In The Lake

There are so many people on this site with primary language as English but i have to admit that the way you play with words and make them sound so beautiful...its unique.

Beautiful poem once again.
Your imagination and choice of words is simply the best.

all the best and take care

I sure saw a lot of great things throughout this poem. Some alliteration, some wonderful word choice, and some great imagery as well. You've penned a really great piece here, it was a pleasure to read. :]

5/5.

This is a beautiful poem and a delight to read. Not keen on 'mesmirizing' and 'hyponitizing' bit, because it's been used a lot, and what you were saying was strong enough. I do however, like the vocabulary, particularly in the third stanza. The whole piece flows fantastically and the idea of 'refuge' was nice, you brought it to life. Well done.

A mystery indeed. This write shrouds me with
images that questions..liked it!

Wow this poem is beautifully penned. I like the images which you have painted. The vocabs that you used was terrific.It really enhances the poem, bringing it to life. I also like that u minimize the numbers of words used in each line. I absolutely enjoy reading this poem. keep it up

Excellent Job
5/5