A lake...I have an imaginary lake where I go to when I am in emotional pain. I like this verse!

Somehow this verse leaves me feeling like it this lady is a force trying to convince you to dive into the lake and swim too far, you know...to lure you into her world until you drown. I don't know if you meant it this way, but this is the image that popped up in my head.
It is a beautiful poem, though. Written in perfect pen:)

Good job Silvia:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Sylvia
What a beautiful poem you have penned. The imagery and word choices are great.

Moonlight,
glistening
on a
mirrored surface.
Water rippling.
my hidden lake.
Place of refuge,
mesmerizing,
hypnotizing.

How vivid the image you have painted with your words. I feel like I'm standing looking at this beautiful place.

Devouring me,
the lady in the lake,
a succubus.
Awakening, satiated.
Uncertainty overtakes me
fantasy, illusion, reality?

I love the ending with the questions. Wondering if what you saw was real.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Wow this poem is beautifully penned. I like the images which you have painted. The vocabs that you used was terrific.It really enhances the poem, bringing it to life. I also like that u minimize the numbers of words used in each line. I absolutely enjoy reading this poem. keep it up

Excellent Job
5/5

A mystery indeed. This write shrouds me with
images that questions..liked it!

This is a beautiful poem and a delight to read. Not keen on 'mesmirizing' and 'hyponitizing' bit, because it's been used a lot, and what you were saying was strong enough. I do however, like the vocabulary, particularly in the third stanza. The whole piece flows fantastically and the idea of 'refuge' was nice, you brought it to life. Well done.

I sure saw a lot of great things throughout this poem. Some alliteration, some wonderful word choice, and some great imagery as well. You've penned a really great piece here, it was a pleasure to read. :]

5/5.

There are so many people on this site with primary language as English but i have to admit that the way you play with words and make them sound so beautiful...its unique.

Beautiful poem once again.
Your imagination and choice of words is simply the best.

all the best and take care