Country Song

by Deana   Mar 23, 2009


Stars at twilight, growing dim
Once they shined so bright
Clouds above now passing through
My lonely country sky

Scent of roses fill the air
Lilacs soft perfume
Silent walks remembering
Dreams once made with you

guitar strums a heartfelt tune
Drifting on the wind
Melody of spoken words
Return to haunt again

Birds still sing refrain of love
crickets play along
Music of a dreamers world
A sweet sad country song.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Guitar strums a heartfelt tune
    Drifting on the wind
    Melody of spoken words
    Return to haunt again
    ^^^
    Such a sad touching stanza Deana.

    You can feel the air of sadness and loneliness in this piece.

    Great read my friend

    Luanne

  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Great job, Deana!!!
    As I read this it was like the world just melted away and the melody just carried me off.
    Great imagery and impeccable flow.
    Keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Guitar strums a heartfelt tune
    Drifting on the wind
    Melody of spoken words
    Return to haunt again

    ^^^

    You are so right Deana..how these memories can haunt you..

    Beautiful sad poem, I could feel the intensity in your words.

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

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