Guitar strums a heartfelt tune
Drifting on the wind
Melody of spoken words
Return to haunt again

^^^

You are so right Deana..how these memories can haunt you..

Beautiful sad poem, I could feel the intensity in your words.

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Great job, Deana!!!
As I read this it was like the world just melted away and the melody just carried me off.
Great imagery and impeccable flow.
Keep it up!

Guitar strums a heartfelt tune
Drifting on the wind
Melody of spoken words
Return to haunt again
^^^
Such a sad touching stanza Deana.

You can feel the air of sadness and loneliness in this piece.

Great read my friend

Luanne