Comments : A Break

  • 15 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    Short and sweet, I always love these. The ending was a bit rough, but I still rather enjoyed it. Thank you for the wonderful read dear.

    Aurevoir!

    ps: I write my poetry how it comes to me, haha, sorry if it was confusing, but thank you for taking the time to read it darling.

  • 15 years ago

    by SHYSTY23KO

    Causing reminisce of your face.
    Walking empty halls, empty hearted;

    those two lines especially stuck out. This poems leaves me wondering, and thats good. well written! it flows great!