Red Room

by Tourniquet   Jun 12, 2004


Run into a door,

Now I’m flying,

Hit the floor,

As I’m dying,

Red covers the room,

Where my body’s lying,

Now it’s a tomb,

No one loves you,

People whisper in my room,

Everyone will leave me too,

For my black lonely doom,

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  • 20 years ago

    by Tourniquet

    This poems was a lot longer but their some parts that I felt were unnecessary or strayed from the point I wanted to get across. Thank you for all your comments.

    Tourniquet

  • 20 years ago

    by julie

    that was excellent, well done (you spelt tomb wrong though), but it was great! Julie -xx-

  • 20 years ago

    by Million Tears

    wow! yeah i agree it is a different style but in a good way!

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