by Bullets Are My Best Friend Mar 25, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
When I realized that you were gone |
by Saving Grace
Very relatable piece. Something alot of people will understand. It was a good effort, and it was expressive and powerful, but i think it ended much more stronger and more intense then when it started. I loved the last stanza, the way you wrapped it up was perfect, but in some parts at the begining i think it could be worked on. But thats just my opinion. Apart from that its well written. Keep it up. |