Wow, Mel, that is so deep and profound, I loved it. You should tell me more about it so I can understand it better. :) 5/5

Bri~

Absolutely brilliant, I have tried to express my emotions about the title perdition, but your poem simply completes mine.

"Child, your far too gone,
to understand heaven"
without our father
your soul shall
not rest.

Astounding, usually I have much to say when praising beautiful poems such as yours, but I am lost for words.