Comments : Ghost to The World

  • I Love it
    :)
    I like how you have used the emotional and bought it together with the physical
    "ligaments of lies"

    Its short and straighten to the point.
    And your use of words is great.

    well done

    xxx

  • 15 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    You just gotta go and be all depressed dont you katherine..?

    Ugh. it's good though. :)

  • 15 years ago

    by SHYSTY23KO

    Oh sad =(
    i love how u really set the mood with your choice of words and how you string em together. its like your puttin so much feelings and thoughts into a short poem but do it so well!
    and i can relate, that always helps! hate to be able to relate to such painful feelings tho!