by Blissful
Woot new poem! |
by Ingrid
Temps, |
by Ingrid
Oops, I forgot to say: replace it in the second stanza, because you used the expression twice. |
by Sylvia
Once again you stepped outside your comfort zone and I like what you did. A rubber band ball, you took an object and brought it to life and compared emotions and feelings to that object. Well done. 5/5 |
by Cindy
I agree with Sylvia.....I like the use of the rubber band ball.....how the elastic wraps you up and smothers you till you are no more. Very different and unique :) |
by The Prince
Interesting to see something new from you. |
by PoetryKnight
A wicked awsome poem indeed. and even though it may not be real, it still wraps the minds of those who comprehend it to an even deeper thought. How each band is different, it is still part of one huge thing, and he may not want to go where the oters are, but his life is not in his own hands. he just has to follow the fate that is set before him and realize it as well. again I say, well done with this poem. a 5/5 rating indeed, and you shall recieve it. I just dont understand why other seeit and it has a 4.4 rating. oh well, have a great life and live it as well. |