Very simple quote, easily understandable. The only thing I didn't like was how you were repetitive on those words like lying, knowing, etc. I know you did it on purpose but in my opinion, I think it would be better if you didn't repeat it and just put the word down once, so it's like straight to the point. Overall, good poem! Keep it up!

Thank you, it's duly noted and I thought about doing that at first (it was actually written that way the first time around), but I was thinking when most people are in distress and just crying there eyes out how we like to repeat things over and over again like "how " or "why". I felt it was more realistic this way, but personally I liked it better the other way as well.