Your words express vivid images and comparisons with nature. Good job. 5/5

Adel
Your words are always a pleasure to read.

I am the pour of all the roses
thirsty in your deserts and sands
to your map I am the waters
of all your heavens and lands
upon the cold of your loss
and the glove of all warmth and hands

Such vivid imagery and wonderful word choices. I loved the entire poem but these lines were my favorite.

Take Care
Cindy