The fear of you

This is really sweet, love it 5/5

When i am feeling low and sad and blue
I sit alone and think of you.

(good start, alot of imagery)

And hoping you will come near
And knowing that you cannot be here

(things get sad here, but still good)

Wanting to hope what i feel is true
Wishing that our time together never flew

(Beautiful)

Desiring my mind to finally clear
Contented least with getting rid of all this fear

(good diction here)

Yet i thought i still had a clue
Suddenly i realized i never really knew

Then all the words You've said to me i can finally hear
Like, trying to make me smile, it makes me tear

For remembering all the good times we've shared
That then i remembered you've always cared

This is a really good poem,. you had a lot of good elements. keep it up. Shanik