Comments : Lotions and Potions (Monchielle)

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Ha ha! This was funny Silvia:)
    Yes, so many people spend a fortune on magic potions and lotions.
    I have found that a cheerful nature and having a normal, healthy lifestyle are a far better way to keep looking young.
    I do not like the plastic version of Burt Reynolds much;)
    The natural look is always better, even if it means having a wrinkle or two:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sylvia
    This is the first funny Monchielle I have read :) you did a great job!

    Lotions, potions, magic!
    I say, no more of this,
    leave my face as it is,
    wrinkled, spotted, puckered.
    Signs of wisdom, gee whiz!

    Each and every wrinkle and spot earned. A proud badge of life :)
    Love Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Well, its nice to see you making a funny poem! Monchielle's are very difficult to write, nice to see you were up to the challenge and brave enough to try it.. interesting write!

    5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Oh how I loved this delightful read. It's amazing how when we look back on our pictures from years ago we can never get back that youthful glow. I believe this could be about any aging woman. I don't age gracefully. Just fully. Great Job and quite the humorous read although many truths found in it.
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    Take Care, Kay

  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Yes I agree..we do so much to maintain us
    that it is becoming a pain in the neck! Enjoyed this read..take care.

  • 15 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Funny one but with very good message.
    Really liked the way you started every stanza with
    Lotions, potions, magic!

    Beautiful write...very refreshing

    all the best and take care

  • 11 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Lol, I liked the last stanza the most.