by SheFlowsThroughMyVeinsLikePosion Mar 26, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
It doesn't matter that you think of her, |
by PygmyPuff
I really like how each line is like a line of certainty, followed by uncertainty. And its consistant which is nice. My only thoughts to improve would be the grammer, such as i to I and a comma after rush. Also the lines in the last stanza (the ones with "certainty") seem to be a bit less developed than the "certain" lines int he first stanza. |
by Hollywood
Humm I liked this. |