Changed My Life

by Tina HiHater   Mar 27, 2009


There was this young girl
only 15 years old.
Her life was a mess, always so cold.
No one seemed to care about her.
For everything she was always unsure.
She alwasys thought about killing herself.
She was so lost, she felt as there was no help.
She hurt herself in ways people wouldnt understand.
All she had was cuts on her arms and hands.
She cried everyday of her life.
Keeping everything inside.
Her bestfriend was a knife
or as she thought in her mind.
Until one day, the day things changed.
The day where she never felt the same.
Came this one person who put a smile on her face.
It was something she never felt before.
She felt as if she was flying through space.
For once she felt adored.
He brought life back into her.
She was diseased and he was the cure.
After that day she left her bestfriend.
Tried to be happy as much as she could.
She knew as long as hes in her life
shed be okay.
She loves him more than anything.
And hopes one day to be his wife.
With him everything just fades away.
Everything turned into color, its no longer gray.
She loves him very much.
Shes just wants to feel his touch.
Be with him forever.
And leave him never.

___100% based on my life dont take it pleasee=]

i love the person who changed my life. you are the other half of my heart. you are my rock i can always lean on<33

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lettredufront

    Awh seems like some one is in love over here, very nice written. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by *ox-detoxicated-xo*

    5/5 girl!! nice work!! keep it up!!

  • 15 years ago

    by MERCY is never shown

    Wow this is really good and u can tell its rooted in real feelings and passion um your flow was a little off but the power makees up for it its really really good BRAVO!

  • 15 years ago

    by XoXBeautifully BrokenXoX

    Heyy this is great i love it! do u mind if i put this on mi bebo and tagged i will say who its by and everything.

  • 15 years ago

    by Kaila

    This made me tear up a little. it is so vivid and amazingly worded...