Perfection

by AngelicDecadence   Mar 27, 2009


Warm brown eyes staring into mine,
As if trying to find a sign,
Soft lips move as they ask again,
"Are you sure you're not perfect?"

I smile and laugh, he hasn't got a clue,
He doesn't know what I've been through,
It's good though, I'm happy like this,
So I say, "No hun, once again, I'm not."

He looked to the sky, holding me by the waist,
Whispering to me while we were embraced,
"Well gorgeous, even if you're not perfection,
You're so close to it I can't see the difference."

I laughed at him as he stared into my eyes,
"Do you think this is perfection?" I compromise,
He answers with a few words of his own,
"This isn't close, it's ... so much more."

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It was an actual conversation too haha :]

Hope you like ;]

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  • 13 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Beautiful its like the end of a love story 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Rusheena

    Beautiful! I can picture this scene as if I were watching a movie:)

  • 13 years ago

    by Decayed

    OMG that was PERFECTION..

    so tender and moving!1!! LOVE IT

  • 14 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Hello...it is very sweet. I love it. You write very well. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Jess

    I love all of your poetry.
    the ones i read anyways.
    :))
    this poem in by far my favorite though.
    I dont know why, it just is.
    dont stop writing, you have some real potential.

    And it would be greatly appriciated if you could comment and rate one of my poems.
    thanks love!

    -jesss.
    Btw:: Im putting you in my favorites ;)