Atomic Love

by Insoluble   Mar 27, 2009


The hearts we possess
are made up of positive vibes;
any negative feelings
would remain outside.

The bond we persevere
will never go off course,
how our hearts interact
can be referred as a nuclear force.

We live a balanced life hand in hand,
while awake and as we slumber.
Each indelible moment together
is represented as our atomic number.

I'll show you my affection
by creating a datum,
clarifying our love is inseparable
like an atom.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Wow the last stanza really great, i loved. very emotional. keep it up. Shanik

  • 15 years ago

    by Mommys Lil Angel

    I lk how u used nuclear forces to show her how much u love her well i love it for ur first look forward to other ones

    loves
    katie 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Really nice how you compared you love for your girl to nuclear force.

    A good first poem:)

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

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