I like how this was written in old english , and it's really gloomy . I get like a medieval time vibe from it , and it flows really nicely too . Really well done . 5/5

It reminds me of a pirate. XD I adore pirates. Haha. Nice flow.

Okay, first I would like to say I love how this is written in old english, that really caught my eye and was something different for a change.

I thought this was a brilliant write and very unique too, great flow and wording, it just held my attention.

Excellent job, no suggestions whatsoever.

Keep writing, always and forever...

~MaryAnne